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Very emotional and expressive. You did an excellent job of scribing a mental environment and adding a few layers of meaning to it. I couldn't recognize the rhythm of the poem, though.
The sadness and hurt came through very well and expresses a lot about you, and what's going on around you. The snow was an interesting touch and added a lot--it brings to mind childhood and the simple pleasure of winter weather.
I enjoy how much thinking it takes to fully understand the poem, and even then, it's the faintest mystery, which is descriptive in and of itself. Well done.
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